<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">五绝<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span></span>残雪<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">暖照残雪挣,<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">依然眷恋逢。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">只因一世灿,<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">甘愿化成风。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">五绝仄起首句押韵<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">仄仄平平,(韵)<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>平平仄仄平。(韵)<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">平平仄仄,<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">仄仄平平。(韵)<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p> 原上的诗早有耳闻!<font face="Verdana">诗风长韵,学习学习。</font> <p>拜读佳作,谢谢原上大哥。小妹不才,承蒙教化,初始于平仄中,吟五音之迭起。而后于形字间,觉物象之本意,方工为诗。旁人是无从了解我从原上大哥这里学到了什么的,如果没有当初对韵律的严格指导,就无法领略诗词之美。今小妹在此和一首昔日旧作,以表恭敬。</p>
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<p> 七律。江城初雪</p>
<p>户巷馀清响,冬江浪似花 。 <wbr><br/>泛烟铺渡口,轻羽履平沙 。<br/>长水悠然下,小舟自在斜。<br/>半山云岸外,初雪遍低桠 。</p> <span style="font-size: large;">2016年的第一场雪。。。</span> 诗人病了 但愿诗人早日康复 <p><strong><font size="4">好久不来路网,今天来耍耍</font></strong></p>
<p> </p> <span style="font-size: large;">应当常来耍耍的</span>
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